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Silence is this Land by ~taiyoukousen:icontaiyoukousen:



Silence is what I walk,
And what I feel is right,
I don't need anyone to hear,
These winds blow, causing
the earth to give in,
Crumble,
Destruction.

I never liked destruction,
It's something I wish to avoid,
So walk I do in Silence,
Thanking what I have,
Little maybe,
But a glorious world,
Of Heart.

I tie the rains that come to wash
This land, Allowing them perhaps
a day to bloom,
Though the Sun is still learning to shine,
Crops in the soil, I wish you well.

This land is barren, much too difficult,
For anyone to live,
It is dry and unpredictable,
Dark and windy.

So a kind guardian,
When the land was born,
Compels even the most daring,
To a land more suitable,
A land perhaps in peace,
Maybe even a Legendary one,
A land with flowing, clear streams of water,
Whom stretch the entire plateau
And flowers, beautiful to the root.
This land, the Guardian knows
May have little chance of survival,
So "I'm sorry my dear, follow through this way"
It is not That Land.

I have nothing to give you,
But the path which is better for you,
Altruistic,
Love and Compassion,
Sanity and to your Blessings,
I will always pray,
Justice,
I must go alone.
©2008-2009 ~taiyoukousen
:icontaiyoukousen:

Author's Comments

Silence,
Is me, perhaps.

This poem has many hidden meanings and feelings about it that reflect directly how I see myself, and how I perhaps, deal with things.

I doubt it would interest anyone to search for it, nor do I believe it would provide any significant benefit, so don't worry about it.

It's a sort-of-random poem I suppose, made at my parents' work, on the computer.

If you have any comments, feel free to express them here. There is no limitation what you want to say about it and me if you want.

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:iconczaren:
It's such cool poetry ;o; :heart:
Yehey for silence ;; <3
:iconjellyacey:
aw:D Yes. silence :heart:

The last verse was very nice!:D >:3

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Yes, my love. This world of ours bleeds, with more than just the pain of love - Faiz Ahmed Faiz
:iconyaminayugineatema:
i agree with :jellyacey: the last verse was very nice indeed <3
I wonder where silence goes too, for when someone goes where silence is, silence is no longer there.

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How long must I wait, to see your smile again? *YaminaYugineAtema
:iconluinahtzi:
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Hoeii~!! This is so amazing~!!:heart: I love the third verse, and its first line most especially!! "I tie the rains that come to wash", there's just something so beautiful and poetic about it~!:heart: :clap:

You're such an awesome writer, Kuya!*A*

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:iconzeroshii:
wow this is impressive :heart: you're such a great writer!
:iconzeroshii:
ps: for some reason i love this : "Crops in the soil, I wish you well." ;)
:iconmau506sk:
This poem has plenty of love and nature :D you can practically hear the sounds of nature when you read this, (even when the topic is about the silence ^^; ) very beautiful :heart:

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:icontaiyoukousen:
Hey Mauricio!
That's so nice of you to say!
:hug:

This is pretty dark though--- maybe even slightly depressive :( ~ But it does have love and nature I guess--- I put my heart into this writing :blushes:

How are you doing? Is your studies coming out well?
I know I haven't commented on your beautiful work yet, but I promise you I will okay? :heart:

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If anyone sees a wrong let him change it with his hands, if he cannot then let him change it with his voice, if he cannot let him hate it (the wrong) in his heart, and beyond that there is no faith~ Prophet Muhammad(SAW)
:iconmau506sk:
I see what you mean, though I didn't notice the depressing part too much in the begining, but don't worry, it's just that I have no too much experience reading poetry in English ^^; anyway, I expected that you'd put your heart in this, and as I see, I wasn't wrong at all, ;) it's very noticeable how you put love in this :heart:

Well, I'm doing well, I was recently a little sad because of the same stupities I've been telling you since months ago, but well, at least I'm receiving professional help now =( How about you? ;)

Aww, well, don't worry, of course I gotta admit I miss your sweet comment =( but I'm not anybody to force you to comment, I respect your decision ^^ , so don't worry about that my friend :hug::aww:

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:iconaddicted-freeloader:
Nicely written, I love the way you made depth in the poem by silently expressing yourself.
Good to hear from you again, too!

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