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A dream I dreamed of sunlight bathed on coral sand,
Next to sparkling water, large rocks, and a cliff.
There she stood faceless, but I knew who she was,
I ran to her, and soon saw some little ones.
They were children, faceless just the same, but I loved them
From the bottom of my heart as if they were my own children.
Embraced I did to her so swift, and we stood on that place,
Soft and Gentle...
I woke up.

I don't know what this dream meant,
But sometimes this heart had wished it was real.

Doesn't It make you think?

When you look at the stars,
How they glimmer in the sky,
The sound of their 'Ring Ring' as they fly past,
Or sit still-- watching, seeing, glowing,
Birth to Old age, to death and a new Birth,
It is like love to me, and so many things.

The whispers in those skies seem all too familiar,
'You'll find that person someday' and,
'When you graduate and get a good job,
We'll get you married', she said.

Can this ever happen?

I have no home for her,
Or pennies as wealth.
My children would suffer,
Wife would go thin,
Waiting out on the wooden balcony,
Cold and in pain within.
I'd cry all night long,
But then I'd be too late,
The children would either die,
Or I'd have to give them away.
My wife I'd doubt would stay,
She'd know she should have
Married another man,
And will go just for that,
Because I didn't have nothing to give,
But pain to them in my hands.

I love them so much, even if I will
Never know them at all,
And for their best, I really feel,
I shouldn't have such a beautiful thing
Like that after all.

Don't tell me you love me,
Don't tell me you'd spend your whole life
With me.
You are blind from an idea that is too hasty.
Don't say you want to get married,
Don't tell me you want children.
I love them so much I cannot see them,
or you suffer.
Please, Please, forget about me,
Please, Please, do what is best for you.
I should be alone,
Do you still not see?

I don't even know how to cry,
It feels so wrong,
This pain can be so unbearable,
I fear your Hurt.

Do you remember,
That tree when those
Two would sit, or the
Train station the girl and the boy
Would meet?

He loves that girl,
And he can't even tell her.
He shouldn't tell her,
He can probably never find the words,
Afraid He'll always be to disappoint,
And Hurt her too.
She probably,
Never loves Him,
It won't work.
He'll walk away,
Girl don't worry.

Shoo those feelings,
You silly man,
It will only be,
It should only be,
A Dream.
©2008-2009 ~taiyoukousen
:icontaiyoukousen:

Author's Comments

So hard to write,
I wish to change it,
I wish to erase it,
It's so hard to write,
I want to hold it back.

I...can't...
Say it...

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:iconyaminayugineatema:
your to hard on yourself.
nicely written.

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How long must I wait, to see your smile again? *YaminaYugineAtema
:iconpaltzu:
Very nicely written, love it!! ^^

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:heart:Love forever, love is free:heart:
:iconaddicted-freeloader:
I've got the feeling that the 'silly man' refers to you and I think -or at least I think- that you are in love, but worried about telling. Though, I could be wrong.

About the poem; it's very well written. Again the depth is amazing and the feelings are expressed real good. Tsuki-kun, don't force yourself, you know it will bring you no good if you do.

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Real artists never give up.
Ɓ Ө Я Đ E Я Ł І И E
:icontaiyoukousen:
You are very clever and spot-on in your analysis,
Indeed, aren't we all in some entanglement when it comes with Love.
For me, personally, if I could make this between you and me only, (can't private this message), I feel as if I'm in love, but I deny it, I believe I want to deny it, I have too, because somehow I already can predict the end-result. I know that's so silly to say, since everything in life is uniquely unpredictable, but I fear too much in other's hurt to have any form of them getting hurt--- it's so hard for me to recover-- I start shaking in terror, grasping myself, and praying frantically for forgiveness.

Thank you for liking the poem. It is honest, non is a lie.
The girl I feel I'm in love with.. I cannot even say here, afraid that she might stealthily see this and react the wrong way, which I'm very certain, and I'm also almost completely certain that she doesn't love me anymore than perhaps just a kind person across the block, which I'm actually ironically hoping for, in a form of my view of altrusim.

You can also see some more of myself and how I am in the Poem "Silience is this Land" both referring symbolically to a behavior and what's inside.

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If anyone sees a wrong let him change it with his hands, if he cannot then let him change it with his voice, if he cannot let him hate it (the wrong) in his heart, and beyond that there is no faith~ Prophet Muhammad(SAW)
:icontaiyoukousen:
Thank you, I really appreciate it.
What do you love about it?

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If anyone sees a wrong let him change it with his hands, if he cannot then let him change it with his voice, if he cannot let him hate it (the wrong) in his heart, and beyond that there is no faith~ Prophet Muhammad(SAW)
:iconpaltzu:
Everythin!! The message is so touching and the whole way it's written, it really makes you think ^^

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:heart:Love forever, love is free:heart:
:iconmotuhanu:
hmm... i have a lot to say to this.... and i will say it in person after finals because you have been dodging me and i have been tired/busy and school sucks, and we havent talked like EVER so we need to talk about a lot. and i miss you. im sorry about how i can be hisaam... bhai... im so mean sometimes, i think i just get engulfed in my own sadness sometimes... im sorry. we gotta talk about you and everything else. after finals.

love you,
hanu
:icontaiyoukousen:
Very good, I like that comment! :D
Thank you for liking it for that reason,
It is meant to be as a thinking device

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If anyone sees a wrong let him change it with his hands, if he cannot then let him change it with his voice, if he cannot let him hate it (the wrong) in his heart, and beyond that there is no faith~ Prophet Muhammad(SAW)
:icontaiyoukousen:
You know me well, I suppose,
But sometimes I believe, being hard on myself is good to keep me in check; This peace did help me out in calming myself.

Thank you Yamina again, for your kindness =)

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If anyone sees a wrong let him change it with his hands, if he cannot then let him change it with his voice, if he cannot let him hate it (the wrong) in his heart, and beyond that there is no faith~ Prophet Muhammad(SAW)

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